Title Sequence First Edit

This is our first edit of our title sequence. I like this first edit as is shows a bit of rawness and passion linked in with the soundtrack which is what we were really aiming to achieve.
However a criticism is the lack of titles which we intend to add in later. It'll help in creating a house style for our film. Another criticism is lacks in explaining the narrative which is essential for our title sequence as it is, as well as being a title sequence, meant to show the beginning of our film.
As you can see it is very short. We need to film more scenes, preferably football scenes and images that will help in understanding the narrative.