Feedback

1st viewing Feedback

After our first viewing to our class we got feedback from other groups and our teacher.

The main feedback we received was that there was no sense of narrative. Because our title sequence is meant to set up the story line, leading into the main plot of the film it is important that it tells the story unlike other title sequences that may be quite abstract. As a result of this feedback we plan to film more football related shots as well as shots that establish the different settings. Another interesting idea we could do to make the narrative clearer is adding dialogue so the audience will know exactly what is going on. Or better yet we could include images that will be inter grained in the title sequence whilst telling the audience what is happening e.g. newspaper reports. 

As a result of this feedback we are going to use our best efforts to improve our title sequence and make sure that it has a strong sense of narrative.